MaxVDub - Your
Level Up song is awesome. I like what you have, RC ready!
Unlimited Lumpia - excellent work.
Happy Happy is already going on RC 2.
Defeated Courage and
Threed Sled will go on furtre tracks. I would suggest a little more of a easing of presentation in the beginning of first few moments of Threed Sled because it comes BURSTING out of tha gates. I love that, but that might be a bit abrupt for CD and audio listening for others.
Pinstipdiva - The
AB Simles and Tears song sounds too technically composed and horns sound off for some reason. It sounds a little dow in mood. I would try to cheer up the mood more with the song. It's suppose to be a happier song.
theReverendAG -
The Lonely Winter Soundstone Freezup sounds very nice, but there is quite a bit of over string sliding sound effects in the beginning of the piece. If you can avoid that it would be prefered, but if you can't that's ok.
CarbonDog -
Star of Twoson is a too digital in presentation with what it is trying to accomplish. The piano seems a little abrupt and the chorus feels like there could be a better solution for that part of the song. The composition is nice and Like the different foreground instruments used.
Electrospecter -
Winter Ambience is a great song, quality work. Definitely RC bound.
PsiHeroNess -
Winter of 1989 is a great song for the nostalgic presentation that you give, I would add a little more variety or something new to the second repeat of the song to keep the listening wanting to hear the full song instead of expecting the same iteration. It is a very nice song and RC worthy but I feel it could a bit better!
Stevesesy -
Winters and
Winters Redux are nice and a good start. You need to be a little less harsh with the piano and let it flow more or add something to allow it to be a little more softening. The nature of this particular tune doesnt go well with the straight forward piano key hits.
Goodnight is really good but there are parts that are sounding a little too technical such as the background ambience and and the organ-like sounds. There must be something to soften the transitions between notes to mask the digital nature of this composition.
In the Rain is doing good, I really like the piano in this work but the same ambience problem is persisting here as in the other ones.
bstring -
Both Dance of the Moon Kangaroos and
Freedom Song have heavy percussion and should tone it down a bit. I love the guitar on Freedom song, it is really good. The Moon Kanga one needs to have the purcussion lessened and other music brought more up to the foreground.
JustinB -
Fire Fire,
Hirake Goma Doufu,
Twoson and
Open Seasame Tofu are harsh technos. Fire Fire and Twoson would come the closest to becoming accepted, but I think it still they are pretty boom boom boom when presenting themselves. I am warming up to Twoson more and more as well as Fire Fire.
BenSpinSpace -
Fourside Piano is a great song, no improvements needed!
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